Oh, it is true
I am no beauty
You see right through
What you think is me
I am, will be, no more
Than what you see
I not a door, a window
I ennui and twee
But you forget
I have a mind
A soul
A life
I love
And you
are blind
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE/IMAGE PROMPT by imahealer.
675 points, ended May 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope you like it....
Comments
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Very cleverly versed. "I ennui and twee", a wonderful statement and combination of words. I find a very creative mind who writes out-side-the box! Thank you so much for your entry!
Linda -
Wow.."you are blind"...powerful words and a very strong conviction.
Mylee -
I like your concept esp. the ending " I have a mind A soul A life I love and you are blind." Beautiful poetry. Good luck in the contest.
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