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My lovely shade

 

 

You turn envy into mint,
and bleed dark skies grey;
If I use you just a hint
colours fade away...

 

 

 

 

 






 

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  • Forbidden Kiss
    August 3
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    this is awesome... few words bring lots of thoughts you are truly an amazing poet keep on penning!

  • XXVampireeyesXX
    July 17
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    too short for my taste but you did great here... very well done!


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    July 6

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    Great job with this poem
    my friend! Keep up the great
    work here and thanks for sharing
    it with us all!




    Jeremy0826

  • Sunrisen Traveler
    June 23
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    Short and with a hint of darkened sweetness. I like it.
  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    June 21

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    oooooh short and sweet how i like em . . . and great tone!
    well done

    Tasha


  • DeGraw
    June 19
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    Superb

    With what ease the verse flows!

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    June 9

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    wowzers I truly loved this poem the way you have written it with such style and detail made it so unique grasping and amazing.it was just amazing well done


  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    June 6

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    now this was wow for me I get a double meaning from this poem. Your imagery is wonderful! ~blessings always~ Trisha


  • Stardust-luvr
    June 5

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    wow hun colorfilled - intense and intriguing yet profoundly emotionally empowering. it actually brought tears to my eyes. well done and many blessings always xxxx


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 3

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    A very intriguing piece of thought penned here. This has a certain poignancy about it. Nice write!


  • XxMurderxScenexX
    June 2
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    this is outstanding!!!


  • Valley Girl silver member
    June 2

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    Fantastic write. Short and to the point. Thank you for sharing this with us.
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 1
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    This is beautiful love you

  • markgrif gold member
    June 1
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    Lovely as is found in title.



  • Desire gold member
    May 27

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    Oh My Gosh!!


    Oy! This is one Brilliant piece my Friend and the images also message Powerful~ but to the point with a lesson to learn in between the lines
    Loved this!!
    Wooooooooo Hoooooooooo
    Keep that quill dancing~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • delightfulmess gold member
    May 26

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    this is outstanding!!! Such a unique vision on the prompt Great depth and meaning.

    Sensational
    Best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    May 26

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    Wow--am greatly impressed you got such a wonderful poem from the prompt! This is one of those poems I think you should send out to be published--I just keep reading it over and over. Good luck in the contest!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 26

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    Wow!!

    Exceptionally well done. Exactly what white added to colors will do. Impressive. Very very impressive. You truly are a master at brevity. ~Pamela

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 26

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    Ohh love this take! very deep... kinda fascinatng the 'use you' bit! Great write

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 26

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    Oh I like this very nice take on this goodluck in the contest thanks for sharing much love always

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