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And I dance.

The music starts playing,
my heart starts beating,
I step onto the floor.

And I dance.

The fluid movements
flood through me
and I cannot stop
for I am dancing,
leaping
soaring
flying
free.

And I dance.

Exhaustion and fatigue
overwhelm me.
but I cannot stop.
I cannot stop.
so I continue on,
lagging
behind the flowing melody.

But I don't care
because I'm dancing.
setting myself free
flying away
from the sorrows of my life.
flying away.
Flying free.

And I dance.

Beads of sweat
trickle down my cheeks
muscles sore and weary
but there is no end
to the fluid movements.
so I continue on
breathlessly.
the dance
so much a part of me
that I can't step away.

And I dance.

The beautiful song winds to a close
but my dance cannot.
my feet
cannot stop flying through the air
for they have the spirit of the dance
inside of them.

So I stop trying to make myself stop
and start trying to make myself start
letting myself be enchanted
by the beauty of the dance.

So I take a deep breath and fly away

So I dance.

And I dance.

A contest entry

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    terrific

    Dancing is a fine way to express energy. There is such a thing as dancing too much all at once. Be sure to stop for a break and have a sip of water because you can get dehydrated and you can injure yourself physically. Keep up with that and you're soaring endlessly across the floor. Excellent poem. Written with good spirit and positive flow. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
    Brian