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Whisked

you were whisked away from me
so now let the wind take me too
that I may lay next to you once more
and allow our rose of love to bloom anew

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  • urapns66
    July 31
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    i love this one
    awesome job
    God your getting good

  • SilverStrandedEcho
    June 3
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    A soft and warm hearted piece. I found the flow to work well. Thank you for your entry!

  • urapns66
    May 27
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    the flow works but is kinda rough still really good though. great job =D

  • Bad Bill
    May 27

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    I like this very neat take on the prompt. Short, to the point and the flow is spot on. I might be tempted to substitute the word "bloom" for "become", but that's a very minor quibble.
    Excellent work.

    Cheers,
    Bill