quick glances out the window
temperature reaching a dangerous low
just waiting for darkness to rise
and stop the liars and their lies
black clouds roll through the sky
picture perfect for one's last good-bye
wondering where your soul will be laid to rest
as Doom's Day takes its very best
Author notes
1` PICTURE ABOVE
Epic to the Limits --Purplepick @ Flickr
A contest entry
- #13 OPTIONS CONTEST (: by TheGreatestLove.
550 points, ended May 31, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Amazing flow love the rhyme scheme and everything about this one sirously
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Interesting take on the picture! I like the imagery of stopping liars and their lies.
Congratulations on the Silver!
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thanks for the lovely comment
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great work!
love the last few lines. keep working i only see improvement!
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brilliant...x
"black clouds roll through the sky
picture perfect for one's last good-bye"
this was what I was looking for; great take on the prompt~
best of luck
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