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mistaken

A boy walks by and a tear falls down my cheek
I walk away and try to act sleek
Days go by and not a word is spoken
To think he was to my heart chosen
Now friendship is all we can be
To think of memories is agony
I walked away and I wish I was still by his side
There is no telling the tears I have cried
We were once lovers, now just mere friends
But these feelings of love will never end
He keeps walking and so do I
We both know our past demise
Our lives are now different because of me
Some things in life aren't meant to be

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  • crushed
    June 9, 2008

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    This was a very sad poem and a realistic one I can very well relate too. Thank you for entering my contest.

    -crushed