Everytime I look at you
My heart skips a beat
I wonder if you know, My love
My heart is at your feet
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Love is precious
I found my special one
I love her more than anything
Don't rush love!
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*nods...*
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excellent choice of words, it's short but shows so much emotion
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I can't stop thinking about her
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she's lucky to have you, even if she doesn't feel the same way
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BFs (best friends) @__@ I'm sorry... I just don't know how to love guys like that... ugh. Forgive me.
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I don't need to forgive you...there is no need I understand...this is just how I feel though
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Wow imagery is really strong ..
so few words but carried a POW
s Lib x x
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It really just what I feel about her
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This reminds me of a friend and the way he loves my other friend.. it is so sweet the way he talks to her and cares for her.. This poem is to the point and is clear. Nice work.
Good luck with you love, Saix!
~ from Marluxia
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>_< yeah (just saying) it's me... and um... D: I just don't like any one cuz the last person I loved left me and it cut deep. I felt like I could never love again and it was pretty much true. I feel bad... I don't know what love really is any more unless it's like a friends love and thats what I have for him.
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Everything will work out, don't worry I'm here for the both of you
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Once Agian Thanks
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Just another tool
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Thank you Marly
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You're welcome Saix-kun.
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