HEART SKIPS BEATS WITH EACH SECOND THAT PASSES
SLEEP HAUNTS MY EYELIDS
TAUNTING IT WITH THE FEELING OF SECURITY
THE FEELING OF RELIEF
BUT AS SOON AS MY EYES CLOSE THE DREAMS BEGIN
WAKING UP IN NIGHT SWEATS
PANTING LIKE A DOG
HEART SPEED FASTER THAN LIGHT SPEED
LIGHT SPEED IS HOW FAST I WANT THESE BAD DREAMS TO BE
SO THEY CAN JUST GO AWAY AND LEAVE ME ALONE
ALONE
LIKE HOW AM NOW...
I WONT SAY WHY CAUSE I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW
ALL I DO KNOW IS
THAT I KNOW NOTHING
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Wow!
Can i say what a nightmare?
Or were just writting? Either way this gave me cold chills.
I liked the line "SLEEP HAUNTS MY EYELIDS"
Great write indeed!
-Mandi
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A decent stream of conciousness kind of poem, but I find the all caps distracting from the work, they're just not needed.
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Nightmares are awful things to have, but the way you told yours seems extra taunting.
I wish you happier dreams in the near future.
A tip for you for an interesting write.
Try playing some relaxation or meditation music before falling asleep, it works for me
Thankyou for sharing,
Love and light.
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