I'm the smallest around
with important people I stand.
I am here to make a statement,
and help understand the power.
As a collective we are strong,
but once we break off from each other...
...we tend to look for guidance
as the dilemma proceeds forward.
Not holding onto others for comfort,
I'm paralyzed in my silent nights.
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Prompt Dew [I don't think this was what you were looking for huh?] (Hope you like)
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A contest entry
- Quickie. by warrior-eagle.
400 points, ended May 26, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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Wow sis!! Just... wow... what a brilliant poem with such depth.. I feel like this at times. Congrats on your Gold!
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I didn't think it was what I was looking for until it brought a smile to my face, until it brought a couple of tears out of my eyes and until I realized that in a way that was me, that in a way you wrote as if you knew me, without intending to. This should at least get silver. Good work.
..Simply Me♥
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