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Knit One Purl Two

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One would wonder

why the day is so yellow

after the gray shitty weather

but I know it’s the nature

of the thing

to be woven in different colors

of the same

 

 

~~~~~

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Image: http://floriandra.deviantart.com/art/Golden-light-3-90429920

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  • Balldinger silver member
    May 29, 2008

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    Weaver Scanton Moss Burrow

    here is this piece of shifted niftiness, balanced on a pit loom and graced with a Boston coffee shirt, and ain't nature just grand? ~ EZB


  • righteousme
    May 28, 2008

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    oh can i come to wherever it is you are... curl up under a quilt and have you read me yr poetry far into the night... loved it loved it loved it...


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 27, 2008

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    this really has potential..... perhaps, if you are going to use the term "shitty" that you could ahve built on that a bit so it does not stand so alone....there's a time and place for that description to be danged sure. *smile*


  • Lexie
    May 26, 2008
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    good poem