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Dancing Solo

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The evening air was warm and still the sun a golden glow,
she listened to the music of a man she didn’t know.

Each note played to perfection as it hung upon the air,
she just had to close her eyes to feel that he was there.

Piano was her greatest love, they called his style New Age,
Portuguese but little else she’d read it on his page.

His style she’d come to understand and love with such emotion,
intoxicated by his sound she gave him her devotion.

She wrapped her arms around her waist and gave into the feeling
of being whisked around the floor, it left her senses reeling.

Alone she danced the night away among the blazing stars,
imagination captured him with music and guitars.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • moonbumps silver member
    May 27, 2008

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    Charismatic write packed with romance-I'm dancing...
    xxx Love Hilly


  • arafura gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    "Alone she danced the night away among the blazing stars,
    imagination captured him with music and guitars."

    Great stuff! The imagery is wonderful.




  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    Doesn't music just do that too! Capture us and our imagination and take us places that we may never go...

    I love this Sue!

  • Michael P
    May 26, 2008
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    you took me there-


  • libithina
    May 26, 2008

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    I so loved this .. I danced and swirled around ..
    and I too imagined the piano and guitars .. sublime!!

    s Lib x x

  • Bob Fox
    May 26, 2008

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    Poetry

    poetry in motion and as it should be written. A joy to read and a wonderful sense of romance. Purely captivating with perfect rhyme. Well done poet

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