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Eternal

Forever in my heart will our love remain.
For though our bodies fall,In spirit love remains.
And in my spirit do I hold our every passionate bliss.
For even when we are apart our Eternal love exists.

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I hate to hear of others in pain.And hope that these words could bring them some relief in even some small way.

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  • earthstar
    May 27, 2008

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    thank you for your words of comfort and reminding me exist. Thank you for your write. It helps to remind me of the good times. Very sweet and touching my heart strings.


  • StarEyes
    May 26, 2008

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    What a great entry for this contest!! I hope Brenda finds as much comfort in these words as I have. You said a lot with so few words.

    Best of luck in this contest!!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 26, 2008
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    Lovely

    For just a few words your thoughts here speaks in volume