looking through the [window]
into a brightly "painted" world;
surrounded by intense beauty
yet always feeling alone;
drawing disparity of...
...invisibility
Author notes
Prompt: "White Crayon"
20 words more/less (used 21)
[window]= as tho crayon box
A contest entry
- Prompt 12 entries/ 20 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended May 27, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Held inside a world of our own often keeps us safe, yet it can be lonely...nicely creative and wonderfully written piece...thank you for sharing!
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This is an exellent take on the prompt.
Splendidly done indeed
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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Inside
Inside our little world we can stagnate and become invisible. The pain of being who we are. Such a deep yet sad write
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