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Alone in the dark,

I wait for you and your light.

Until then, I sleep.

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Haiku.

A contest entry

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  • azure85 gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Alone in the dark,
    I wait for you and your light.
    Until then, I sleep.

    Very good haiku, it can have many meanings-the light, who you are waiting for. Thank you so much.


  • Breathless Ballons
    May 27, 2008

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    wow, this is really beautiful. I can really relate, how sometimes you wait and wiat for that something special. Or in this case, that SOMEONE special. You said a lot, in very little words. And that is amazing, I really believe that only a god poet can do that.

    Great job, good luck in the contest... ♥


  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    May 26, 2008
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    I like it!!!

    This piece expressed a lot of emotions!
    Good Luck in the contest!
    ♥♥♥♥