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You

"You"

I think about a lot of things
some things good, some things bad
but there's only one thing in the world
that makes me smile when I think about it
You.

I wonder, day and night
about how you're doing
and how you're feeling
and when I can feel you right here with me
all I wonder about
is you.

I enjoy talking to you
because I care about your feelings
I care about your present and your future
and I care about your life
all I care about
is you.

I love the way you talk to me
and the way we communicate
I love your beautiful green eyes
and your lovely blond hair
the thing I love the most in the world
is you.

Author notes

Another poem from my heart devoted to Sock, the bestest person in the world!
Thanks to Babs for helping : )

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Comments

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  • WaterDragoon
    August 28, 2008
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    Great poem Paril!!!!!
    i adore this poem.
    its very well written.
    Great job!!!!
    ~Moonchild~


  • starryknight87
    June 12, 2008
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    Awesome man! I like it, cute touching from the heart, can't beat a solid write like that!


  • killshort
    June 11, 2008
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    Good write jon


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 9, 2008
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    Awww.... i like this alot
    good jobers


  • Nephlim
    May 26, 2008

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    Awww! I love the way each stanza ended, and then how the poem ended, very powerful and beautiful! Sock is lucky, lucky
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • evilbatwoman
    May 26, 2008
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    Damn straight her lovely hair.
    This is really sweet.
    Fills me with warm fuzzies.


  • Sock
    May 26, 2008
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    So sweet. Thank you.

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