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My Melting Heart

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A single flame

In a melting heart

I’ll hold it dear  

Whilst we’re apart

 

This treasured beacon  

Whilst you’re away

Will be my focus

As each day I pray

 

But when you return

I’ll blow out the flame

And my exuberance   

I won’t contain

 

There’ll be such joy

As once more we kiss

And we’ll thank God

For our mutual bliss

 

Till then, this single flame

In a red melting heart

Shares my vigil

Whilst we’re apart

 

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  • PurpleSky
    April 24, 2009

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    very sweet and loving. I wonder if you used the picture as a prompt or did you write this piece and find a picture for it? once again a wonderful read
    huggles
    Lena


    • agazeley gold member
      April 24, 2009
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      Lovely to see you again . . must be years . .

      The contest was to write about the picture -
      There was a time when I won a prize writing about you . .
      those were the days . . haha.

      Albert. x


  • the ripple
    November 20, 2008
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    This poem is showing so much love and patience, it shows how love is suppose to be, great write

  • mz.butter
    November 6, 2008
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    this is a very good piece,it screams true love,and I loved the picture.


  • Ellis gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    Excellent

    This is lovely, Agazeley
    What you felt through this I feel
    Clearly here love I see
    To me this scene is very real


  • poetryality silver member
    August 1, 2008
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    My oldest grandson (9 years old) is my friend, and confidant. He's been in Miami with my eldest daughter since June. I miss him! This poem reminds me of how much the little fella is missed. Great job dear Albert!

    Much Love Always ♥

    Renee


  • Lislaine
    May 26, 2008
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    WAW,, really amazing!!! whooohoo hey, hope you had fun! thx for entering and GOOD luck

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