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The Answer

Alone I sat
Upon my chair
And my thoughts
Filled with despair

Why was I here?
And what to do?
What to fear?
(Is there a reason?)
Then there was you

I turned my eyes
Upward to glance
And with that rise
Came quite the chance

A chance to see
A chance to know
A chance to be
A chance to grow

A heart so pure
So loving
And kind

A heart that
(immediately)
Bonded with mine

Here I sat
Asking why I was here
And there you were
The answer 

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This is for Paril. :]

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  • killshort
    June 5, 2008

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    YAY my sister has a love i know im late on this but oh well. I know you and Paril will be together for LONG TIME


  • Psychotic Moon
    May 26, 2008
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    awwww...this is soooo cute!


  • evilbatwoman
    May 26, 2008

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    warm fuzzies are attacking. you kids really need to do something to fix that.


  • Nephlim
    May 26, 2008

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    Awwwwww! This poem, itself is, the way it was written, beautiful and so well flowing. I love how it rhymes so well! Pariloth is lucky also, I loved the ending
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly
    A+wesome


  • Paril
    May 26, 2008

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    Awesome!

    Aww, thanks Sock : )
    This is exactly how I felt as well. Immediately bonded
    I love you, Sock!

    -Paril


  • Mrs. Mautino
    May 26, 2008

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    Sock, this is NOT cheesy at all, it's beautiful and filled with love I'm sure Paril will love it

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