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A Simple Goodbye

When you lay down at night
can you close your eyes and rest
remembering how you have done others
putting their love through a test

cheating, stealing and wanting more
their tears pouring from you insolence
do you care that you closed the door
on their heart loving you anymore

You believe their love will not die
this is the end, a simple goodbye

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1. Living the good lie

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Oh my

    As one lives the good lie they lie to themselves that it will be everlasting for being its a lie someone always finds out and the pain out weighes the good ten fold Good write here


  • penman gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest