Beneath the tree of knowledge
In the garden
after lunch
Adam isn't looking very happy
I loved the soup,
And main course
but
not sure about the sweet
The ice cream was paradise
but
I really think
a pie
needs something
inside the pastry ...
A contest entry
- Before The Apple... by Dalaney.
950 points, ended June 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well darling well done.
Love you
PAssions
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What a chuckle I got from this...you've certainly turned a lack of apples into a peach of a poem!
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Well if anyone was going to do a funny with this one...
I think I should have done a funny.
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