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Hey!! Big Brother

 

Big Brother come out to play

Smile and join the fun today.

Your kitten waits in the tall grass

And you will hear her as you pass.

 

 

Above your head you will see

Someone else who came with me.

Silent is he that soars the sky

As he watches over you and I.

 

 

All your friends said they’d be there

We even got a “Yes” from Growling Bear.

Wind Spirit will bring our Wild Horse

So now there is no room for remorse.

 

 

Hey!! Big Brother, hear what I say

Little Sister is here to take you away.

 

 

Author notes

This is for my Big Brother Mike. Hope this helps return the smile to your heart...Love you Big Guy.

Background made by freepririt51 ...give credit if you snag.

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  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    June 11, 2008

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    Nemehotatse Little Sis...

    Sis, you bring more than just a smile to my heart. Daily your kind soul embraces me in more ways than one.

    I am the lucky one to have so many friends show such warmth, none more than you could ever show. Niaish Little Sis, nemehotatse.


  • Sharcu silver member
    May 30, 2008

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    Well, you invited me to come back and read more and I saw this on your page and wanted to read something funny. Definitely made me smile and I'm glad I read it. Very well done... ^_^

    --Tim


    • freespirit51 gold member
      May 30, 2008
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      Sharcu

      So happ to see you again so soon. Happy to see this brought a smile to you.

  • midnightblue1272
    May 28, 2008
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    Nice

    Love this rhyming style of yours. Very playful words of encouragement here. Fine work.


    • freespirit51 gold member
      May 30, 2008
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      midnightblue1272

      Nice to see you like this special poem. MY Big Brother needed a lift to his spirits.


  • coffeeangel316
    May 27, 2008

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    I like this poem. It has a wonderful flow and rhythm and it is simply cute. enough to make ever one smile. great job. Niaish for sharing.


    • freespirit51 gold member
      May 30, 2008
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      coffeeangel316

      Well I thank you for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed and glad it brought you a smile.


  • Angelflower
    May 27, 2008

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    This is just really sweet and very cute!!!
    I'm sure that this will bring a laugh to his heart..
    It sure brought a smile to mine..Thank you for sharing!!


    Angel

    • freespirit51 gold member
      May 30, 2008
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      Angelflower

      Thanks for your kind words, Glad you enjoyed and brought a smile to your heart.

  • Whispering Wind gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    WHAT A HOOT

    now I am so sure this is going to pull a real chuckle from his ribs...I just love the background niaish so much for sharing your dear sweet heart with him and all of us and a big thank you for entering


    • freespirit51 gold member
      May 26, 2008
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      Tender Wolf

      So glad you enjoyed. Hope it will tickle him as well. Hope it makes you both feel a little better.

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