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         O Hell! what doe mine eyes with grief behold,

          Into our room of bliss thus high advanc't

          Creatures of other mould, earth-born perhaps,

          Not Spirits, yet to heav'nly Spirits bright

          Little inferior; whom my thoughts pursue

          With wonder, and could love, so lively shines

          In them Divine resemblance, and such grace

          The hand that formd them on thir shape hath pourd.

               Paradise LostBook IVJohn Milton

 

 

 

 the way back is blocked by an angel with a blade of fire

and our own thoughts are barred by our misery and pain

there are no words to call it back to mind …

 

Children

utterly careless of time

sitting bare-arsed

and unaware

on dips of

   damp grass

 

think of the first rest

in a warm afternoon of play

before the longing for lemonade

while the grins

and shouts of the game

   are still fresh

 

how can we be naked

if we do not know

what clothes are

we are children

who never yet

   asked

 

   why

 

… except perhaps seen by the wise eyes of a blind puritan

   whispered and echoing in the ears of a deaf poetess

 

 

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  • Sagerider
    May 27, 2008
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    Food for thought

    I may have to read this over a couple of times to get all the meaning but I liked it.


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      May 27, 2008
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      Sit light to it, 'Rider; if it's going to get clearer it'll get clearer. If not, please feel free to enjoy it being a little cryptic. Or IM me and we can talk about it.

  • Bad Bill
    May 27, 2008

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    A venture into Prelapsarian waters, I see? Love the Miltonic references--in fact, I love the complete poem.

    Much admiration,
    Bill


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      May 27, 2008
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      Tapadh leat!

      I must admit that Milton makes me want to turn in my pen. He is just so brilliant.


  • NeonRose
    May 26, 2008

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    My first impression whenever I read your work is, "I really need to go back to school!" ...You always amaze me with your depth of insight and knowledge of nearly everything! I humbly applaud...

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