at times,
thoughts, are naked -
fragmented,
in their incompleteness,
and meaning,
become soul’s search -
adulterated,
in its innocence;
when moments,
ponder significance -
tinctured,
with future’s vision,
and existence,
the essence of knowing -
immortalised,
as an unfinished poem.
In a list
A contest entry
- Greener still... by Peteskid.
900 points, ended May 27, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love this concept...and you've treated it beautifully here. Congratulations on the Bronze.
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Your comment
is much appreciated. I love the rose
that goes with your aka. Frans
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Congratulations on the bronze. To tell you the truth the list of unfinished work rivals the finished work in more ways than one. I just hope when I write that last line........ somebody will not have to buy a newspaper to read it.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Leo
there is also something such as "too much work and too little time"!! Perhaps we should try to remember living by that last line so that we do not have to write it ... Thanks for reading and commenting. Frans
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Wonderful, loving words written here. Congtatuations on the Bronze Trophy....Katie Lazette
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Katie
I appreciate that you sense 'loving words', and thanks for reading and the 'congrats'. PK sets wonderful contests. Frans
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Liked the sentiments you have expressed in these lines - so easy to read and understand, liked the flow and message you share here.
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grannyeri
whenever I read your comments, I remember my early days on AP and your loving supportive guidance. Once again thank you. Frans
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This a a gentle and thoughtful poem, these verses are rich in feelings and imagery, life as a search, meaning the goal and test of existence, such wonderful depth here. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK
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