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Lakeside Reflection

dusky pink sunset,
makes a golden path across
the lake to my heart.

A contest entry

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 5

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    *sigh* so beautiful. now I wanna go see a sunset by a lake (in person, cuz this piece took my imagination there)

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Sunkissed xo
    November 7, 2008

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    This is absolutely stunning. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, I loved every bit of it! So filled with light and joy and love well done to you! thanks for entering the contest!

    Chin up,
    Summer Moon xx

    • harriet567
      November 9, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thank you so much for these lovely comments and for the Bronze trophy!! Best wishes, Harriet


  • SignifyingNothing
    October 18, 2008

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    This is very pretty. I think a lake at sunset is one of the most beautiful things in existence. I saw one when my family went on a trip to Maine, a sunset in the sky and the rays reflecting off the lake. It was quite gorgeous. This poem reminded me of that.

    Thanks for entering my contest and letting me read it!


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    July 1, 2008
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    subtle in beautiful imagery.


  • azure85 gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Dusky pink sunset,
    Makes a golden path across
    The lake to my heart.

    Very nice use of images, the sight of the sunset, and the golden rays of the sun. Thank you so much.

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