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calling you home

Struggled to stay
in my dream
light beating at my eyes
trying to make me wake
and tear me from you-

I felt you again,
if only in my head,
I got to hold you
in my arms
and feel peace -

Not yet again,
and I
hope
and wish
that my sleep
carries me back
to your smile-

Waking makes me
sad,and I find that
with out your face
in the light of day
the dream keeps
calling
you to me,
to home.

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  • Akimbo silver member
    June 25
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    So personal...

    I felt I had invaded your thoughts.
    You have a gift.
    Kj
  • sooo awesome i love it

  • Taedium
    May 31
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    I like it

  • I love this. It reminds me of me. I had a dream like this last night, but woke before it ending. I hope that I will be carried back that way again tonight. Wonderfully written. Keep the ink flowing, Krystal. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~


  • LionessK Greeters member
    May 26

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