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Naked old man wishes he was not Russian





The naked old man
crouched
a fascination on his parsnip face
the scent still lingered
boiled cabbage, beets, dog

her babushka smelled of it

outside he raised his eyebrows
snow flakes melted on stitched up
lips. Eyes needled down
he dived on the hare

ripped it open
guzzled it's blood
gnawed it's tender bones

burped

lay back, ice scalding his scrawny buttocks
scrotum shrivled tight against the cold

overhead black fumes from the Collective
smeared the sky a soupy brown
hiding the winter solstice

he cackled like a crow
waved his arms through drifts, became an angel
watched, amazed
his erection rise, high as any chimney!

he froze that way
that old man
                     a plucked chicken on ice
he died
dreaming of Perestroika
hearing the Red Army Choir approaching

wishing he wasn't still Russian

 

 

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Inspired by the title of Lute's latest.

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  • milkdrop
    November 3, 2008

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    i'm very suprised the only one person commented on this.. but then again maybe they were like me and having read it over a few times, still have nothing to say. the images speak for themselves.. i can really feel the shame in this poem, the boiled cabbage and dog is so strong right off and lingers throughout the poem. this is so repellant, and at the same time, beneath everything is just a sad old man and his blue scrotum.. it ends in pity i think.

    anyway this is perfect- more humanity than is comfortable.


  • Dalaney gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    I think this is outstanding poetry. Your style is evident - fascinating, slightly shocking, sensual. The elements of a talented and gifted writer. I will always be your Number One fan, Artiste. Always. Love, Lane