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Syllable Count

Like a merciless
Weed that is choking free will
Out of a poem.

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  • azure85 gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Like a merciless
    Weed that is choking free will
    Out of a poem.

    Ha-that could be haiku, but thank goodness for modern haiku that let you use 17 or less! Thank you so much.


  • Note The Sarcasm
    May 27, 2008

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    This one amuses me. I don't think I could write something like this. I hate counting syllables, so I just don't. It's too annoying.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    May 26, 2008

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    That is great. Good luck and many s