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MY PAST LIFE
embraced a deserted plant
and loved the lack luster autumn
in all its counts

My present state is mended and moulded
to look  sweet and  more beautiful
and should look like a spring flower with tender sprouts

I pray for it and surprise you with the  brush strokes

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PIF QUICKIE/IMAGE PROMPT

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  • imahealer
    May 26, 2008

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    This is certainly an unusual, yet beautiful verse on the image prompt. A poem of rebirth and transformation. Only a poet with a pen-brush could paint him/herself over. Well done and thank you for entering my contest!

    Shana