Boxed within sealed chamber
are thy wicked works
secured by four corners.
Now spells cast, falter
as pure annoyance
for Isis hath answered
and removed bane eternal.
Former atrocities
are repaid through karma
and thy comeuppance
shall extend far beyond
thy current lifespan forever.
A contest entry
- For Wiccans *Quickie* by SuicidalLover.
700 points, ended May 29, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sweetness! Four corners...huh...
Thanks for letting me venture into your world. Blessed be! 
~Kystal Angel
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ATTA BOY!!!!
YOU TELL 'EM!!!!!!
karma has a wonderful way of paying things back, but with this spell, well ... it can only go one way!
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I really enjoyed reading this poem that you written
excellent take on the prompt.
good luck
Blessed Be!
kat
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I really enjoyed this piece. It took a different spin from reading the others. You are true with what you have said above. It is karma that everyone pays for in this life. Good luck to you in this contest! Merry Meet! In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Irdessa MoonFlower~~
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Interesting write
I know nothing about the Wicken yet feel some fear from it
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Nice, really outstanding poem with an excellent excecution of language. I also see the structure as very effective, with the stanzas having three, then four, then five lines. To me, this shows a progression, and this could relate to the poem as, "Former attrocities are repaid...". I think this short poem is both very enjoyable and meaningful, very well done!
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Wow.Wow. I was not expecting this.But it is good I like it you are so right that what we have done or what has been done to us by others will be recieved back in the pain that was caused.I promise not to get on your bad side
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