Its 4am and time for work, I need to get out of bed.
Shower, shave, and grab my things, my eyelids feel like lead.
On my phone there is a message, this is what it said.
“Have a good day at work my love!” the words dance through my head.
The day defiantly starts off right.
A lot of work it has been rough, a very busy day,
A call from you I had to miss, there is no time to play.
Later on I played the message and what you had to say.
“I know your busy Danny boy but call if there’s a way”
I will certainly call tonight.
Now its time to get off work, and I’m feeling almost lame.
Calling you on my way home to hear you say my name,
My raging mind and restless body your voice begins to tame.
My stress and worries melt away from our love’s burning flame.
Our love shines bright.
Although we can not be together since you live in another city,
I still love you all the same; you’re caring kind and witty;
Honest and to the point and your really very pretty.
I adore you my little angel, my one and only Britty.
I love you with all my might
The thought of life without you gives me quite a fright.
Life without your love would be like a world devoid of light.
Author notes
Another love poem I wrote. As with love poems I had written to a specific person I care about I try tying thier name into the poem. This one is no exception. The pocture is of Brittany and this poem was written April 21st 2008.
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Woo
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Its about time you commented on your own poem.
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another excellent write my dear friend
keep it up!
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Thanks I tent to write well when wriing about a specific person.
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this was pretty good hun, the sentiments, what you were trying to get across that was said nicely...only i feel the last two lines and the rhyme by adding them, makes it sound forced....i think you could have ended just at the "i love you with all my might"
otherwise lovely, I'm sure she loved reading it, it's always nice to read something thats for/about you...
take care
TAsha
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Yeah i know i have been thinking about jusst getting rid of them.
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It is good that you are friends.It is hard to keep up a long distance romance, Ros
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Yes I know. I've had a few fail on me.
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this is very sweet. i like it. and it does suck that you guys live in different cities. i know the feeling. it has happened to me many a times as well. kind of sucks... no, really sucks. lol. good job! keep up the good work!
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Doesnt really matter now though since she is dating someone else. We are still friends though.
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Aww this was really sweet and heartfelt hun..
You really expressed how you felt so well..
She's one luck girl!!! I really liked this..
Glad your so happy..
Angel
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Oh we broke up a few weeks ago. we are still really great friends though.
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