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Listen To The Warm ...

In the darkness of my room
I lie here all alone
As slumber takes its hold of me
I know he'll be here soon.

He drifts into my memory
Between the dusk and dawn
And every night he lingers
And then we travel on
In the golden sunrise
He's always on my mind
Within a crowd  ~
I'll see a smile
He seems to stand behind

A ghost of my existence
A shadow from the past
Aglow with true emotion
The warmth of love at last

He mirrors my reflection
My heart's an open door
And when my journey's ended
He'll be mine for evermore
I know I love him deeply
It's the end of hide and seek
And where I go ... I'll always know
His heart is mine to keep

A ghost of my existence
A shadow from the past
Aglow with true emotion
The warmth of love at last ...


© 2008 Joy A. Burki-Watson

Author notes

My poem was created by sensing that 'we are never alone' and even though that 'special someone' is not present ... their spirit of love is always there to embrace us! Believe! joy

This poem was set to soothing music by Bill Hansen of the "Clearwater Connection" and recorded under the title "The Warmth of Love" on their "Timeless" album.

http://www.clearwaterconnection.com/products.html

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  • earthstar
    May 27, 2008

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    A ghost of my existence
    A shadow from the past
    Aglow with true emotion
    The warmth of love at last ...

    i love these lines thanks for remind me of the spirit of love.
    thank you


  • myriad-dark
    May 26, 2008
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    a lyrical piece of warmth

    nicely penned with a lovely flow... write on! dear friend, write on! 'd' rose*


  • StarEyes
    May 26, 2008

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    Thanks for this entry into the contest! I am sure Brenda will the comfort that I was able to find as well.

    I would love to find someone to put some of my lyrics to music...

    Best of luck in this contest!!


  • Yemassee gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    Your poem was put to music? How cool! Will go follow the link in a minute. A nice way to approach the problem of distance and hopefully that bond can travel beyond the mortal plane, that would be comforting to know. I'd certainly like to believe that love (in whatever form) was eternal.


  • leo2
    May 26, 2008

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    This literally brought tears to my eyes. It's such a beautiful way to share that special love you had for him. I see gold gleaming in your future.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 26, 2008
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    Truly lovely write here

    I found this peace a comfort and joy to read and so true it is they are always with us in spirit

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