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Another World

These four walls cannot see the fields
Nor contemplate how a woman feels
Darkness cannot will not see
Shine your light of love upon me
To feel your kiss upon my lips
Your body with mine, absolute bliss
My heart is true, feelings unfurled
But my love where are you?
Another World.

Separated by oceans vast,
A dream of love stuck in the past
And life goes on here without you
I eat I sleep, no more to do
I'll never love again it seems
I only see you in my dreams
My passion deep within is curled
For you are in...
Another World

I long to hear your loving sighs
Not live here with my heart that cries
I want to touch your silken skin
And release for you my love within
I cannot live and will not die
For across the aeons I cannot fly
Another time, another place
Another world...
Your tender face...

Passions reach mountain peaks upon my soul
And dreams that cannot be take flight
I wish that you can feel my longing heart...
I wish that we.. had never had to part...

I sit alone waiting for you
Nothing is old, nothing is new
And time moves on and days and years
I have no love, nor hate nor fears
My dreams of you haunt me evermore
I wonder what I love you for...
I shall not dream another love
Another world, far above
There is no other sets my heart aflame...
And this love.. will not be tamed.

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  • ElijahsRaven
    May 26, 2008
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    Alas, here is a worthy entry.

    Finalist for sure.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 26, 2008
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    Amazingly powerful writing here. Writing or dedication to this one person. Of deep love. Of an overpowering feeling of wanting to be with that person. This all comes through so very strongly. You really put your emotions into this Shirl, and it shows. Brilliant writing. Good luck in the competition.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


    • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
      May 26, 2008
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      Aww.. thank you for such a lovely comment Wayne, I do appreciate it. Dark love indeed .. and returned sir.