Do you search
for contentment
in swirls of wind?
Ride currents
on dream clouds
on lonely nights?
Do your tears
echo like raindrops
off a concrete walk?
Come with me
we can chase feathers
as one.
Two doves
in the sunset.
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A contest entry
- Love in its best poetic forms....BIG POINTS :) by CinfullyDelicious.
2300 points, ended June 14, 25 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great love poem! Really enjoyed the imagery! Favorite--"Do your tears/echo like raindrops/off a concrete walk." This is poetry at its best! Good luck in the contest!
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The best lines are ride currents on dream clouds on lonely nights. Tears echo like raindrops on concrete walk. And, so compelling is your plea to come with me to chase feathers, two doves in the sunset. It must have melted whoever you penned this one for.
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oh two doves in the sunet I love you using that metaphor to speak of wonderful love
This was just such a joy to read, enlightening
Thank you and good luck
Cindy
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words escape me...
...because this is so beautifully written in so few words. The whole essence of true love is bound in your meaningful words, and I cannot escape the emotion that it expresses...one of pure joy.
The last lines...'two doves in the sunset' conjures a peaceful, loving image, which seems so complete.
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awwww wow, this is sooo beautiful
lovely write and good luck in the contest
really love the softness of this
take care
stephanie
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