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Splat

Splat the cat
got hit by a car
he tried to run away, but didn't get very far
so he was picked up by a shovel and buried in the dirt
If he was a good cat he wouldn'tve got hurt

A contest entry

Splat!!!!! Squash is not a vegetablee its a verb!!!! hehe

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  • Andy.
    March 22
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    Funny


  • januaryrain gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    poor Splat, I've seen to many cats named Splat and I think that the cat I see crossing the road at five every morning will be Splat one day.
    Good take on the prompt, good luck in the contest.


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    May 29, 2008

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    Oh, let's splat spiders, not kitties! This is a cute piece. Thanks so much for entering my contest!


  • Justin
    May 26, 2008

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    Oh dear. How depressing, yet at the same time, hysterical. The last line literally made me do an evil laugh outloud. Greatwrite! Very entertaining.


  • xox-emma-xox
    May 26, 2008
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    awww, poor kitty! reminds me of my poem about the rabbit...lol! good flow and such, though!
    Emma

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