Picturesque vision of chiffon body hugging white
walking, as peach outlines
white fluffy clouds.
Resplendent skies and rewarding
rainbows, share joy,
praise our love
to priceless gold.
Radiating desire,
I take one-step after the other;
pink tied ribbons trace the destiny
of legs, finding their way to you.
Let the sea-breeze
wash me free of the desperation
in our separation.
and
The closer I get,
I sense your eyes
waiting to rest on mine.
My love, know the biggest,
roughest seas would not stop me,
you’re my answer.
My sweet saviour
I didn’t mean for this distance
trust I am coming,
we’ll be together soon…

) as other commentor's have noted. You weave a consistent theme, lovely imagery, and beautiful phrasing to produce a truely remarkable poem... I'm just jealous that's it's not written for me (LOL)... just teasing. 




As I said, I am in no way upset about you going over the line limit and I thought this poem was pure gold. well done and thank you for sharing! 

this is awesome





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