Cast
It threw me out into the morbid sea
Cast
No more was I the rat to the flea
Cast
To fly through the air
Cast
Feel the chill on my hair
Cast
Whistling through, I land with a plop
Cast
Into the sea, now do I drop
Cast
So dark, when light can't filter through
Cast
Always black, not so much blue
Cast
The bursts of green begin to surround
Cast
Nothing at all, barely a sound
Cast
Teeth sink into my plastic
Cast
Fish caught starts to turn spastic
Cast
Reel me in, I have your prize
Cast
Oh my! Look at its size!
Cast
It flipped a fin
Cast
And began to win
Cast
The struggle and suddenly broke free
Cast
And as to me
Cast
I am only meant, forever and always to be
Cast.
A contest entry
- Impromptu by x Gemini x.
525 points, ended June 11, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering my contest.
I love some of your discriptions, the wording and all.
I admit, I got a little lost at parts, but I'm sure I figured it out
Very original. The format gives some nice drama, I think.
Nice
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Cast
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