Like a bell that´s somewhere striking,
like a shade, you cannot see,
I know that we both are sparky,
and I must say that you seem
to be a dew of my heart´s morning,
there´s all new and nothing corny,
there´s all wild and nothing meek,
there´s all too strong or all too weak…
Like a cloister on a promontory,
like a wave that comes with midnight
sounds to me your heart´s poetry
and I know that I am beside
myself with excitement and I
cannot feel anything, but your
touches, I can go, not apply
the breaks. Love is a two-edge-sword…
A contest entry
- Poetry Inspired Emily Bronte by Room without doors.
700 points, ended June 8, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Outstanding
This poem speaks of romance and of passion. I liked the choice of language and the overall flow of this poem. Your lyrics are strong and I liked the intensity of this poem. Thank you for entering.
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Thanks a lot - have a nice day :-))
Marek
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I like the last stanza best. Best wishes for the contest.
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