Sweetest love you are near,
my heart rejoices for you're here.
I love you is what I feel,
in every seconds that I am breathing.
How I miss you so much,
eventhough we communicate often.
For this romantic love is only for you,
no one else can receive this than you.
Look at me straight to my eyes,
you can see the brightness inside.
Brightness that you brought in me,
how happy my life now with you my sweetie.
Get into my nerves and reach my heart,
you can see yourself like infront of a mirror.
For you are in my heart every single beat of it,
you give meaning to my life that is worth living.
Before i close my eyes to sleep,
how i imagine your angelic face beside me.
And when my eyes open as the sun shines,
my mind is set up to say good morning sweetie.
You are a blessing to my life,
that i am grateful for having you.
You are such a wonderful person,
a person to cherish and take care of forever.
Whenever i stare at your precious face,
how my feelings become calm and drain.
For my worries are left behind,
and i can see how beautiful life is.
Take and put this in your mind,
i will always be an angel behind you.
That if i only have few seconds in my life,
i will just kiss you till the last second of this life.
Author notes
I love you so much..
A contest entry
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your tribute to love is awesome...thanks for entering
novy & Brazos
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A heartfelt tribute to your loved one, very nice.
Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.
Novy & Brazos -
Lovely!
Such a simple yet sweeet poem! >.< It's amazing how you wrote this with great passion and love! Amazing write! keep penning words of brilliance! 
~Ranji
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beautifully penned piece. it's great when you've found your "other half".
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awwww so cute <3
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the sentiment in this shines through, although i must admit the use of 'sweetie' isn't really to my taste but we all have individual idiolects. brave attempt at using rhyme, which is more than i can do so well done you for that. you obviously have a deep attachment to the subject of your poem which i can definitely relate to, so i thank you for sharing that. good luck in the competition, cheers.
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