Frills and thrills
Black paint on my stubby fingernails
Dancing on the floor
Opening and closing every door.
Floating and dying
All at once.
Vomit covering my pink frills,
Smothering all the thrills.
Closing the door...
Peeling skin
Rotten stench of my decomposing body.
Vomit all around
Covering my fun.
Taken down by the gun.
Life crawling away
As my blood mingles withe the sickness I've left behind.
Pink and frills
Gone just as my thrills.
Dead to the core.
Water my body
Bury me under the cherry blossom tree
Where I've spread my wilting wings
That none will ever see.
Author notes
Well this came about a while back in Jan. of '07...so it's like old, lolz. anywayz, this came up when i was thinking about kyo-san in a pink frilly dress...also the song "dead tree" was on my mind so this is what spawned! enjoy...or don't...whatever...
A contest entry
- " PREWRITES ONLY" by wingsofgold25.
500 points, ended June 7, 2008, 54 entries
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I haveen't read the 'DEAD TREE' so i will just comment on the write itself. You did a very nice job with it a nice style and you worked the language very well. all in all a good poem. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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thank you for ur comment ^_^
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