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Abstraction

A stick of white wax
A sheet of black paper
A stroke here, a stroke there
Abstract masterpiece

In a list

A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    What beautiful imagery...the view of creativity in a child...very nicely done...thank you for sharing!


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    May 26, 2008

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    Outstanding poem with great imagery and what I like most is the in-between the lines messages! Good luck in the contest!


  • thepoetssoul
    May 26, 2008

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    Tis a most creative poem indeed
    Wonderful usage of 20 words
    A masterpiece in it's own
    Best of wishes to you


    Tony