Gazing through lifeless eyes
trying to escape all of the lies
the truth is known for sure
the past seven years are just a blurr
please take back what you've done
I had you first born son
did you ever really love me?
why was I too blind to see?
I feel like I won't be alright
I feel like I have really lost the fight
Why don't I ever cry?
why can't I just say goodbye?
why do I run from new love?
I wish i were a flying dove
my words keep playing in my head
it would be easier if I were dead
I'm dying inside and can't take much more
a good life I dreamed of, But that was before
you finally broke me
you are finally free
she'll never be me
you just wait and see
my pride you cannot take
true love you cannot fake
patience is a virtue
what's left to undo?
A contest entry
- You Don't Know Me... by artisticxpoetry.
900 points, ended May 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1705 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I just would like to know if you like it
Comments
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1)you didn't follow the rules so you aren't able to win
2)although the idea of the poem is good and I'm sure you did have emotion behind this, I feel like you tried a little too hard to rhyme.
Thank you for entering...and good luck in the other ones.
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