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I'm Now Letting Go

I release you to your future
as I grasp hold of my own.
You no longer are obligated;
if you care to, then you may.

I'm too much into me now, you see,
to continue this aimless destructiveness.
So goodbye to our past casualties;
hello to the future's wide open window.

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  • Kari gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    Letting go can be very hard to do sometimes, and it can work out for the best after you do it

    Kari


  • individuality gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    a good poem, aye, sometimes we have to focus on ourselves so we may find the inner smiles, once we have those sorted we can flutter them to others.