She drew a heart on my window pane.
I saw it yesterday
long after she had left.
Author notes
prompt: "White crayon"
A contest entry
- Prompt 12 entries/ 20 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended May 27, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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There is a gentleness about this poem that is very compelling. Congratulations on winning the gold. Bravo!
Kind regards,
Helen -
WONDROUS.
Absolutely your very best.
Congratulations on the well-deserved Gold.
Love
Myra
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Very beautiful...so soft and loving...a gentle sigh waiting to be heard...truly a wonderful and touching write...thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for your kind words and esteem. It is not often that I am in time for your contests. It has been a pleasure as always.
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