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Serenity

When the decay of memories

from before are washed away.

We can retain a true bond of harmony

within our soul to give us  the

calmness to be as one within the universe.
In order to achieve this we must amend

our attitudes and not judge the pathways

of the  reflections from our past wounds.

But  disperse them so we achieve a full peace

of  mind .

Which then will bring a warmness of unity

within our soul as we become whole.

Author notes

Inner peace can be reached only when we practice forgiveness. Forgiveness is letting go of the past, and is therefore the means for correcting our misconceptions."

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 30, 2008

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    this is so true but one

    one without forgiveness is blinded by their own pedastal and bound to fall off sooner or letter I would prefer those you seek to be for others as well as themselves
    good write


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    How true, without that forgiveness we will always be stressed out and anxious about it all. Inner peace is needed - faith, hope, in oder to live a peaceful life.


  • Hetha gold member
    May 29, 2008
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    So very true. makes one stop to think about a lot of things we haven't learned to let go of yet. Much harder the task, but at least it is do able. Your piece was well thought out and brilliant however and I see you snagged a bronze for it. Well done.


  • Kari gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    Nods, this is so very true and well done. I enjoyed this. I love that this is so short but yet says so very much!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 27, 2008

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    This is so true too. Wonderful words written down here. Makes the reader pause for thought indeed. Well done for this. Good luck in the contest Maralisa.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x

  • piccola silver member
    May 26, 2008

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    In order to achieve this we must amend

    our attitudes and not judge the pathways

    of the reflections from our past wounds.

    But disperse them so we achieve a full peace

    of mind .

    very true and thank you for sharing this with us.

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