Behind the lone rocking horse
underneath the tinker toy tower
there hides a little ragdoll
wishing to be loved
her cloth skin
is slowly decayeing
from the years of waiting
and acid tears
seams fraying
letting her blood stained arms
fall to the ground
releasing the moths
that have been eating her away
her stuffing lyes astrewn
like iced winter snowflakes
cobweb hair
growing over her antiqued yarn
unraveling the uknown memories
she shared
black button eyes
once supported innocence and fun
now hold a hallway
of hate and disgust
once a stitched smile
now a tattered sneer
she'll lay watching each day
until one night
where she'll slink across the flour
like a slimy albino worm
approaching where you sleep
crawling up the bed
resting on your chest
to feel your sweet heartbeat
that will abruptly come to a cease
with the knife plunged in
fresh crimson pooled about
she'll lye by your side
to walk with you in hell
to be loved
forever more.
A contest entry
- HEARTBREAK, SUICIDAL LOVE, ANYTHING DEPRESSING by beautifull-ugly228.
425 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bloody Thoughts by SpiritDarkmaiden.
1200 points, ended June 29, 2008, 27 entries
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450 points, ended September 12, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Creepy, deep write about how someone is starved for love and affection... To the point of murder... I love this poem~
The imagery Kicks-a$$ too <3
~Crissy~
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Oh wow this is so awesome! Its really creepy but I love it! You are so desciptive which makes it so believeable! I am staying away from ragdolls for a long time...
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HAHA! Thanks!
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Ooooh wow. This is rather creepy. Almost like the Chuky movies, without the hilarity. Well done!
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Wow, talk about a creepy doll. Imagery is amazing in this piece, it's well thought out and has a great story line. Great write!
Bloody wishes
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I really love this poem! I almost see it as the doll is someone who has been forgotten and is getting revenge for it. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but I love it anyways! You are a very talented writer! Keep it up!
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DAYUM!!!!!
That rocked like seriously!! It was like a scary movie or something dude you have mas talent I give you serious props on the detail you used in the one. That was just amazing
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