Life to me
is more than a fantasy
My daughter means the world to me
always knowing she loves me
brings a smile to my face
The way she embraces me
lets me know i need no one else
Her kisses
warm my heart with joy
Everytime she says "I love you mommy"
brings tears to my eyes.
Life is full of little things
especially when you have a kid
life is so much more to me
than a fantasy
Author notes
Wrote about my daughter.
A contest entry
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Comments
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...as sweet as it may ever get!
as sweepingly beautifully written as I've ever read!
Has a very Real and Genuine flavor that speaks volumes of Motherhood, Childhood, and all the inbetweens!
Your a finalist! 
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my baby gurl
Love uuuuuuuuuuuu
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awwwwwwww
How precious. This tribute is sweet. You should look up and listen to a son called "In my daughters eyes" You will love it. I love you sweetie and my grand daughter is cute, Daddy
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Any child would dream of a mommy as loving and compassionate as you sis. Wondeful poem for a beautiful little girl. Thank you so much for sharing it with us x
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Children are gems of our eyes...anything more said would still be less...like your poem close it rings close to me too...Many
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she is such a beautiful girl, I know she brightens your life ... reality is so much better than a fantasy when it comes to the love from a daughter. This was an awesome tribute, thanks for sharing my friend
Sean
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I could not agree more with you if I tried!!! My daughter is the love of my life and a simple hug from her makes life all the better and washes away any misery.....This was a beautiful tribute to a lovely little girl!!! Thank you for sharing....
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How touching sis, bet your little one loves to recieve such wonderful things written just for her. How lucky she is to have a mommy that takes the time to do such things for her.
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thank you she is a joy to be around and loves it when i do things for her
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