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Treasured Moments of Summer

The heat of the sun touches our skin,
the feeling so warm for summer is here.
Friends are saying out loud for something,
bonding with adventure is what we need.

Trip to a place full of enjoyment,
near the beach for a great summer experience.
Travel ten hours riding a bus,
with treasured friends and full of fun.

Check-into a resort full of ambiance,
in a province so peaceful and nice.
The blue lagoon so cool in the eyes,
with fresh beach water and refined sand.

Our room so relaxing with great interior,
how we feel at home seen in our laughters.
We explore around the province,
find spots with significance and beauty.

We've been to waterfalls so far to reach,
one kilometer and half walking it was.
But it was worth walking that far,
for seeing the beautiful waterfalls amazed us.

The nature tripping we have been through,
is very different and that's true.
Just think how you feel when it's first time,
exploring a province so interesting and new.

We look for a hidden treasure our guide said,
curiosity was running in through our minds.
Hidden Treasure is not gold bars and diamonds,
it is a view from a mountain of land and rocks.

The view of the wide blue sea and the green island,
brought us a perfect feeling we never had.
The place was indeed a treasure to cherish and care of,
a hidden treasure that are only few people knows.

Treasured memories is what we felt,
along a summer trip with friends that we had.
Eating lobsters and swimming at the blue beach,
are simple but really treasured moments.

The different shots of different poses and smiles,
are really great to look back in our digital cam.
Now we travel back to our different homes,
priceless moments will remain a treasured moments. 



Author notes

A poem of our trip in Pagudpud, Ilocos Norte, Philippines at Kapuluan Resort. I was with my friends and it was really a great summer experience.

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  • judyjudyjudy
    July 16

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    Nice write, a sort of travel poem, and you do have a lobster picnic at the beach in there. Must have yummy and fun.

    Thank you for entering my contest.

  • poppy 0987
    July 6
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    a very nice poem thank you for entering my contest and good luck

  • My Nemesis
    July 3

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    Before I read your notes, this sounded like a trip to British Columbia, Canada - the mountains,the lakes. It sounds like a wonderful trip and one full of some beautiful memories. Thanks for entering.

  • Swan song gold member
    June 14
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    Well done thank you for etnering


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    June 12

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    Sounds like you had a Dream vacation and every thing seems to have worked out and fulfilled your expectations of SUMMERTIME.
    A well written piece full of excitement.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.

  • peridotPixi
    June 10

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    this is a wonderful poem, thank you to the entry in my contest, i love the detials you have packed in here, and describing summer so well, congratulations on the bronze, good luck in my contest and as always keep up the beautiful writing, ~Amy

  • faithful-star
    June 8

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    Ahh! Summer in pardise, that's what this poem reminded me of! This poem is filled with beautiful and clear imagery and was very well written. Best of luck and thanks for entering!

    ~Faithful-Star

  • DavidTennantRocks silver member
    June 3

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    I love this poem. Brought back memories of going to Fall Creek Falls State Park for a week, the end of May, in Tennessee. So beautiful! Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.

  • myusikah
    June 2

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    From the Philippines! Suwerte...sorry...lucky! I really liked this, it is inspiring. And this:
    The view of the wide blue sea and the green island,
    brought us a perfect feeling we never had.
    The place was indeed a treasure to cherish and care of,
    a hidden treasure that are only few people knows.
    That was just simply wonderful. It is really very amusing. I'd like to go back to the Philippines someday. Maybe I can be inspired by the landscape, cause the last time I went there was before I got into writing.
    But this is remarkable. I like it!
    Good luck!
    --> pia♫♪

  • Quill Bill gold member
    May 29
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    i can't get away on holday this year!
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