I believe in the light
Cascading through your hair,
Casting shadows on my hands.
I see where you are;
Never too far,
And you follow me through
A new
Take on God's will.
I looked and you were there;
Found daily and I still
Absorb your breath
As my own.
I part your hair
To the sides of my window
In the early hours of the morning.
Late dreams wake me,
And lately,
You flow down the street;
I stand with bare feet
In the puddles of your voice.
Author notes
I've never attempted lyrics before this... I have no idea how to write them
but my brother asked me to try.... so I did. It's lacking a lot.. but this was a start.
please tell me what you think... be honest.
[written from his POV --> his g/f]
Comments
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omg I'm hoping to one day see you on Myspace Music Artists! xD
God...you're talented. Hey, I'll learn to play guitar if you help me write the words or better yet, sing them.
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you know, this is so beautiful I don't think it needs music to make even more so. I think, if music was added to it, it might ruin it or take something away from it that just a voice can do by reading the words. This poem has music within itself.
I love how in the ending you referred to the hair again. beautiful.
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This is a true love my friend..and the beats of the heart are turned into the words..I love it..just wonderful my friend...
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thank you very much!
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