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Never More Will Tomorrow Be

 

My time here has finally come

No courage needed for I’ll not run,

This final hour is all there’s to be

The great spirit is here to set me free.

 

I know you shall be waiting for me

For it is your face I long only to see,

When we meet again on the other side

My love for you I will no longer hide.

 

Join me my love as I walk the red path

Now I shall look down from heavens wrath,

Holding my hand until we reached the end

As I will be with my lover and bestfriend.

 

 

Author notes

This is for he who was reported tohave gone before me and whom I hope to be with again soon. He knows who he is

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  • sm51498
    July 10, 2008
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    well executed and beautiful. I have no suggestions but to keep writing.


  • TwilightAngel026
    May 26, 2008
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    A very honest, and heart-filled piece. It is more hopefull, and courageous, than sad. It speaks more of love than of any fear, or mourning for "what could have been". You are going to what you want, rather than leaving it. It seems more happy, and reflective than any other emotion. A very welcome addition to this contest!

    Thank you for entering!

  • Whispering Wind gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    HEART BREAKING

    Such tender words of love and commitment...you have pulled the tears from my heart dear sister I just love your background!!! It matches your words so perfectly niaish for just being you


  • fightingwithyou
    May 26, 2008
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    i really like ur poem and i 2 want 2 be with da 1 who has gone before me again


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    That is a lovely and touching poem

    beautiful artistry in the poem and imagery!
    very touching and healing for the soul!
    thankyou for sharing your talent with us!
    ears/Seattle


  • arafura
    May 26, 2008
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    Very beautiful my friend. Your love for him is obvious. Good luck in the contest!


  • stavykm gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    Excellent

    Wow this is a sad poem but written so well. The rhyme, imagery with flow is increadible and so much emotions and feelings expressed. Oh to loose a loved one is so very painful!! Thank you for sharing with me. You are an excellent poet!
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


    • freespirit51 gold member
      May 26, 2008
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      stavykm

      So glad you enjoyed my small offering. I enjoyed writing this piece. I have been suffering from lack of muze for sometime.


  • adios muchachos
    May 26, 2008

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    XLNT

    If you had two more lines at the bottom which rhyme this would be a sonnet. I like this. It is love like this that keeps the fabric of creation knitted together.
    Simply a great poem, filled with pathos and emotion!

    John

    • freespirit51 gold member
      May 26, 2008
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      Three Egg Omelet

      Thanks for your very kind words. Glad you enjoyed it. I hope it touched you.

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