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Star Crossed

I know that they say there is no way it will work
I’m a dolphin he’s a cow
Our families have gone berserk
But every time I look into the big brown eyes
It makes me feel like I could fly
We swim and play in the water all day
He does that for me, and I know that it’s true
Because there are times that he looks plumb blue
His leather gets wrinkled
And looks water logged
After all people he’s a cow, not a frog
They say that love is blind
But I suppose it’s plain to see
That maybe this just wasn’t meant to be
But as we jump through the water
I dream I had feet
But I can’t live in his world and he in mine
We were destined to part
It just couldn’t last
But we will always have that summer
We spent in the sea
A cow and dolphin swimming happily
Star crossed lovers
That just weren’t meant to be

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  • honey bear
    January 29

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    this was very good , very imaginitive and very very funny, a well deserved winner , thank you for sharing and keep up the good work this made me laugh out loud with the pictures i got from this


  • Lislaine
    July 2, 2008
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    Waaw...

    Great imaginary!! it´s amazing how you did this... very cool and the rhytm tooOoo


  • mysticcrickette68
    June 1, 2008

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    *Wow*

    Now thats something you would Never think of....


  • Hectic Michelle
    June 1, 2008

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    This is too cute! That is a wonderful story of two hearts who were meant to be but there was a physical barrier. I never looked at this picture that way. I hope that you go far in this contest. You did a fantastic job with this poem!


  • bananasfoster42
    May 27, 2008
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    OMG THIS IS AWESOME!!!! it's perfect for the picture!!!! thanks for the entry!


  • PoeticDreamer
    May 27, 2008

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    It's a great poem

    Awww, This is cute. I once felt like the dolphin.

    I didn't know cows could swim much less jump like a dolphin.


  • wildfiredreamer
    May 25, 2008

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    very cute sis. I saw this contest and I couldn't think of anything to write. good take on the picture. best of luck in the contest

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    Rhonie

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