When love yearned for him,
lost in a labyrinth of memories, battles,
Without doors to keep at stairs where could admire
hidden beauty power, shuts in, moonlight.
Aurora leaves her confused,
a perfect beauty in purity,
on a ray of vacuum condemned impertinence,
a flower of lotus to shine in darkness,
perhaps, waiting for consolation.
In night alone, wanders, for plains of eternal solitude,
alone, distressed and deeply empty...
a tear in an ocean without end,
thinks, acts like a dis-entombed pandora,
a feather gilded behind her chest,
like pure radial silk aurora
ignored, poured in darkness,
waiting, loyal to legate,
to remain, to listen, not to despair.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
http://www.sonypictures.com/movies/saawariya/site/images/w-saawariya_1024.jpg
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Prompt: 3. Write about lost love
As I'm 65 years of age, therefore, A fatherly relation is very much suitable.
A contest entry
- PIC prompt by lilmermaid.
450 points, ended June 4, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
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wonderful imagery! Very well done! I accept your offer as my AP father! Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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very nice. i like the imagery. good luck and thanks for entering.
Sarah
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Nicely done... a beautiful write... Best of luck...
Ken
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i really like the last stanza...great write..thanks a lot for the beautiful entry
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Gosh I just love the opening lines there --
When love yearned for her,
lost in a labyrinth of memories, battles,
Without doors to keep at window where could admire
hidden beauty power, shuts in, moonlight.
Already giving the reader the chance to feel so much through your words..A deep write, the sadness expressed so well
I hope you do well in the contest
Cin
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